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That said, a few things jump out at me right away. The bangs on the girl's bowl cut don't really look all that natural; it's more anime hair-ish than realistic, which I get the feeling is what you were going for. Also, her face looks bulky, with her left cheek puffing out like she has the mumps. The shadowing on her neck makes it look almost unnaturally thin, too. The curve of her nose also looks a little too flat for my taste. Finally, her left arm that's raised near the window doesn't look quite right... it's like her shoulder is too far back.
Having said that, of course, there's a lot to like here. The perspective is all very consistent to my eye, which is very nice. I like the different colors on the dragon, and the way it's reeling back. The expressions on the dragon's face definitely conveys the sense it's more scared of that girl than she is of it. Especially with the girl looking so clearly fascinated and awestruck at what she sees! It's nice to tell a little story just through a static image like that.
Hopefully I haven't come across as condescending with my critique, but here's hoping the project nets you a high grade.
I did however notice that her left cheek seems a bit off, as in its larger than the other cheek. Another thing I noticed is that the Dragon isn't at a doorstep but at a window sill, but thats really unimportant.
Great Work Evan
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